the composition is awesome man, and the perspective is right, but there's something off about the colors especiall the skin color and the sky color. You have to have contrasting colors in every piece. Like Blue - Yellow, pink - light blue etc, and don't forget that light light form any source is colored not white. [link]. Sry if this offends you in any sort of way, i'm just trying to give some advice. Gratz on the pic man, minor flaws aside it's a very very good piece
dude, no offence taken at all you're right on the colouration... i did try and use the skies blue as the highlight colour, desaturating it a little, but in hindsight, the pink/gold from the cloud would have made more sense for the cheeks. Really nice of you to take the time for a paintover too. I can see the desaturating of the ground/trees and mountain provides a stronger contrast for the sky. and the light in the buildings too.